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« on: August 17, 2010, 10:00:49 AM » |
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hey, my cousin designed this for his little business recently, and I was wondering if I could see your take on it?  I'm wondering if you could conceive of something more 'your style' in respects to the little man on the skateboard? i think it's a good base for further enhancement, and the font is probably something we should stick with, but stylistic modifications could be right up your alley (butt). let me know if i could see something because I'm supposed to finish the website by next week! thanks, mjh
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« Reply #1 on: August 17, 2010, 10:01:19 AM » |
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ps. please.
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« Reply #2 on: August 17, 2010, 03:28:13 PM » |
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well for starters that is clearly not a little man, that is an A on a badly drawn skateboard.
I don't like the font at all, especially the W. Where did he find it?
everything needs to be more spaced out, away from each other. It's a good start but I imagine that you're going to fix it?
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« Reply #3 on: August 17, 2010, 04:24:49 PM » |
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totally. only reason i say the font should stay is that the prototype skateboard i tried yesterday already has a sticker with that font on the side... and he didn't seem very open to me tinkering with the logo because he was so proud of having created it.
i saw much promise in it, and i'm definitely going to try a whole bunch of fonts/spacings/etc. but something that feels like the above picture.. just, polished.
i guess the point I like is that it's simple - he put a circle above the A, drew a line and two more circles, and he's got his own brand... if, in the end, i (you) come up with something that's totally different and totally betterer i'd use it, but i think he's one of those people who would be set on having a little man on a skateboard.
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« Reply #4 on: August 17, 2010, 04:32:34 PM » |
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make sure to design it on a grid, evenly spaced
and make the skateboard look more like a skateboard, and make the A a little smaller in font, it'll still be readable
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« Reply #5 on: August 17, 2010, 04:47:34 PM » |
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shutup, draw me something.
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« Reply #6 on: August 17, 2010, 05:20:58 PM » |
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what? no way. YOU DO IT.
or your cousin should do it. you just said that he didn't want to change it.
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« Reply #7 on: August 17, 2010, 07:11:10 PM » |
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fine.
thanks.
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« Reply #8 on: August 17, 2010, 08:05:16 PM » |
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I would offer to make you a little man, but all you have to do is shrink the font a little and it'll look fine
I will draw you a skateboard if you want
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« Reply #9 on: August 17, 2010, 08:16:36 PM » |
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I would offer to make you a little man, but all you have to do is shrink the font a little and it'll look fine
I will draw you a skateboard if you want
i was really just interested in your creative vision, but i guess i can just go fuck myself.
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« Reply #10 on: August 17, 2010, 10:59:52 PM » |
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here's a pretty quick way of making it look better: shrink it back so it doesn't look obviously skewed 
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« Reply #11 on: August 18, 2010, 12:48:32 PM » |
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why is there a big empty space on the right side?
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« Reply #12 on: August 18, 2010, 03:27:58 PM » |
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he sucks at computers.
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« Reply #13 on: August 18, 2010, 03:47:34 PM » |
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I like the concept for the man on the skateboard. the font can go though.
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« Reply #14 on: August 19, 2010, 11:32:30 AM » |
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here's a pretty quick way of making it look better: shrink it back so it doesn't look obviously skewed  that looks way better. I'm trying to re-create the image in photoshop, but I'm not sure which font he used.
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« Reply #15 on: August 19, 2010, 11:56:22 AM » |
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on second look, i actually kind of like the wider version if other spacing issues can be resolved!
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« Reply #16 on: August 19, 2010, 12:56:59 PM » |
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well there are better ways to widen it than just ctrl+t and pulling the side
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« Reply #17 on: August 19, 2010, 03:43:02 PM » |
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yeah you clearly skewed the font
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« Reply #18 on: August 20, 2010, 06:12:20 PM » |
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shut up and draw me something
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« Reply #19 on: August 22, 2010, 10:23:00 AM » |
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« Reply #20 on: August 22, 2010, 02:27:53 PM » |
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I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT YOU WANT ME TO DRAW
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« Reply #21 on: August 24, 2010, 03:26:28 PM » |
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dallas what is the name of this font
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« Reply #23 on: August 25, 2010, 07:33:21 PM » |
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